The Magic Box

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6 Responses to The Magic Box

  1. pmoody says:

    Fantastic writing Rania.
    I love your descriptive language and your expanded noun phrases.
    Where did you use repetition in your poem?
    Can you go back and check your spellings are correct?

  2. Lilly says:

    good work

  3. RaniaM says:

    i can not spot any more repetition?

  4. RaniaM says:

    Wait, i did find some!

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