Well done Lilly, you have used some fantastic adjectives and noun phrases in your poem. Can you tell me where your alliteration is? Can you go back and check your spellings as some of them are not quite correct.
my alliteration is pizza place
Well done you have used many things brilliant!!
Rania, could you suggest some improvements to help Lilly?
thank you
Great: you have included many expanded noun phareses Suggestion: Can you add more alliterations Question: Can you add more adverbials?
That is good
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Well done Lilly, you have used some fantastic adjectives and noun phrases in your poem.
Can you tell me where your alliteration is?
Can you go back and check your spellings as some of them are not quite correct.
my alliteration is pizza place
Well done you have used many things brilliant!!
Rania, could you suggest some improvements to help Lilly?
thank you
Great: you have included many expanded noun phareses
Suggestion: Can you add more alliterations
Question: Can you add more adverbials?
That is good