POEM YO

Posted on January 10, 2017 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to POEM YO

  1. pmoody says:
    January 13, 2017 at 1:48 pm

    A super poem Kyran well done. You have used some similes and super adjectives.
    Please could you improve the descriptive language in your final verse? I think you could add some expanded noun phrases to make it more exciting.

  2. Kyran Batman says:
    May 9, 2017 at 4:20 pm

    Ok Thank U!!!!

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