the magic box

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3 Responses to the magic box

  1. pmoody says:

    Fantastic Sherena. I love your alliteration and similes in the opening verse.
    Can you check through so that each line makes sense? You are missing some words.

  2. Sara says:

    good job I like it

  3. RaniaM says:

    me too well done Sherena

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