Maryam this Mitcham forcast is really good you really put thought in it like all those important bits .I suggest you try to put comma ‘s for pauses . do you think there is somthing you can improve.
Maryam I really like your work and I hope its not going to be freezing cold.
I really like it but maybe instead of minus you can write negative 2 degrees celsius.
Who gave you the idea to write about the weather?
Maryam this Mitcham forcast is really good you really put thought in it like all those important bits .I suggest you try to put comma ‘s for pauses . do you think there is somthing you can improve.
Maryam I really like your work and I hope its not going to be freezing cold.
I really like it but maybe instead of minus you can write negative 2 degrees celsius.
Who gave you the idea to write about the weather?
Well done maryame good I love it waa sary bye bye bye.