colud taya monkey

Posted on January 31, 2017 by Deleted User
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6 Responses to colud taya monkey

  1. pmoody says:
    January 31, 2017 at 7:02 pm

    Well done Taya, you have made a good start.
    Could you improve your first paragraph by giving some more detail about the story?

  2. RaniaM says:
    February 3, 2017 at 2:52 pm

    Improvement:Can you add more detail and you’ve had a good start
    Suggestion: Can you start Cloud Tea Monkeys Report with a capital letter
    Question: Can you improve your first paragraph?

  3. Taya says:
    February 3, 2017 at 2:53 pm

    sure mrs moody doing it now.

  4. Harvey says:
    February 3, 2017 at 2:57 pm

    Nice Taya but add more information about the story but apart from that its amazing

  5. pmoody says:
    February 5, 2017 at 2:45 pm

    Taya have you used a fronted adverbial? If you have, what punctuation do you need to include afterwards?

  6. zeinc says:
    February 10, 2017 at 5:04 pm

    Nice Tanya but add more info

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