CAN’T WAIT TO READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you
great story Fatima best story ever
amazing work love it
Don’t put a picture in the middle of the story. Put it at the side or at the end.
Fatima your picture is over your writing ok but well done it is a really good story
So cool! good description in your paraghraghs.
fatima I LIKE YOUR STORY BECAUSE YOU HAVE DESCRIBED THE VILLAGE REALY GOOD
fatima its amzing and cool.
well done it was a lovely story nice descripltion and good spellings.
Good job because she ajectives and subordinabte clause punction
Realy good paragraphs and punctuation
Great story Fatima ,beast story ever
It was was good because you used lots of wow words
you put your hard work in to this well done
you have good adjectives
you did very well but your picture over your writeing well done
Can you rewrite this? It doesn’t make sense.
you did very well but your picture and its good
Can you rewrite this’s. It doesn’t make sense.
tiago i am not rude but it does not make sense
thank you everyone for the nice comments
It is a great story and i loved it .
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CAN’T WAIT TO READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you
great story Fatima best story ever
amazing work love it
Don’t put a picture in the middle of the story. Put it at the side or at the end.
Fatima your picture is over your writing ok but well done it is a really good story
So cool!
good description in your paraghraghs.
fatima I LIKE YOUR STORY BECAUSE YOU HAVE DESCRIBED THE VILLAGE REALY GOOD
fatima its amzing and cool.
well done it was a lovely story nice descripltion and good spellings.
Good job because she ajectives and subordinabte clause punction
Realy good paragraphs and punctuation
Great story Fatima ,beast story ever
It was was good because you used lots of wow words
you put your hard work in to this well done
you have good adjectives
you did very well but your picture over your writeing well done
Can you rewrite this? It doesn’t make sense.
you did very well but your picture and its good
Can you rewrite this’s. It doesn’t make sense.
tiago i am not rude but it does not make sense
thank you everyone for the nice comments
It is a great story and i loved it .