abdiwali

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2 Responses to abdiwali

  1. pmoody says:

    Lovely similes Abdi! Can you check that you have used your correct capital letters?

  2. Kelsey says:

    Really good poem Abdi!
    Can you use more descriptive writing?
    Try and use capital letters for the beginning for the sentence and punctuation at the end of the sentence.

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