Wow! I’m very proud of you Tyrese! A brilliant retelling of the traditional story, Hansel and Gretel. You used full stops in your writing; now try to add other punctuation e.g. exclamation marks and inverted commas. Also, always remember to use the ‘shift button’ to start each sentence with a capital letter.
Wow! I’m very proud of you Tyrese! A brilliant retelling of the traditional story, Hansel and Gretel. You used full stops in your writing; now try to add other punctuation e.g. exclamation marks and inverted commas. Also, always remember to use the ‘shift button’ to start each sentence with a capital letter.
WELL DONE TYRESE,
I LOVE THE WAY THAT YOU HAVE RETELL THE STORY.LIKE MISS VANDER SAID DONT FORGET YOUR CAPTIAL LETTERS