Lilly s trip

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6 Responses to Lilly s trip

  1. Lemar (j2e) says:

    lol

  2. wingh says:

    nice lilly but you spelt enjoyed wrong you did it like enjoud its actully enjoyed

  3. rodrs says:

    You spelled interesting wrong but good work

  4. Ruwaida says:

    Please can you add more detail to your comments and put something positive and a question and a suggestion like this:
    Positive:Did you have a great time at the London docklands.
    Question:Can you put more adjectives to make it detailed?
    Suggestion:Add punctuation to like capital letters and correct your spelling mistakes.

  5. Ruwaida says:

    That goes for everyone!

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