my holidays

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3 Responses to my holidays

  1. Ehsaan says:

    Hi I am from Larch class and your i’s should be capital like this, I, because you are talking about yourself.
    And buyed should be bought

  2. Ehsaan says:

    Looks like you had a lot of fun

  3. Ehsaan says:

    It should be we bought fire works not ‘we buyed the fire work

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