great work!
The poem was brilliant with many strange things to put in a box. If you could, what else would you put in your box? For more cohesion, please check line 3,4,9 and find a synonym for the word ‘smells’.
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great work!
The poem was brilliant with many strange things to put in a box. If you could, what else would you put in your box? For more cohesion, please check line 3,4,9 and find a synonym for the word ‘smells’.