Your Saturn bio is very informative and it also attracts the reader. Where did you get those effects for the words? A little misconception is that you haven’t checked your words like Saturn became Satan.
I liked how you added lots of information! But you could improve this by adding information about some of the other planets . why didn’t you add more information about the solar system.
You researched facts about Saturn and you used features of a news report. Why did you have the pictures of Yuri Gigarin and Valentina Terishkova ?You could improve by a little bit more facts to add to this report about Saturn.
I liked how you compared the Earths size to Saturn’s size.
Did you write your sentences in a blue square to categorize the facts?
An improvement you could make is to make your writing clear since the background really makes it hard to read your writing
Your Saturn bio is very informative and it also attracts the reader. Where did you get those effects for the words? A little misconception is that you haven’t checked your words like Saturn became Satan.
I liked how you added lots of information! But you could improve this by adding information about some of the other planets . why didn’t you add more information about the solar system.
Well done!
I didn’t even know these facts my self
You researched facts about Saturn and you used features of a news report. Why did you have the pictures of Yuri Gigarin and Valentina Terishkova ?You could improve by a little bit more facts to add to this report about Saturn.
Add more information about Saturn like what it’s made out of example Ice.
I liked how you compared the Earths size to Saturn’s size.
Did you write your sentences in a blue square to categorize the facts?
An improvement you could make is to make your writing clear since the background really makes it hard to read your writing
you wrote ‘What’s so special about Satan’ even though it should have been Saturn.