Zara heartbroken sophi3

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3 Responses to Zara heartbroken sophi3

  1. Kyran says:

    I love the fact you done a mixture of punctuation: “What did you do to him!?!?!” shows multi effect

    You could keep the writing a bit neater though. Apart from that, nice work!

  2. ana says:

    I really like your Ajectives and punctuation

  3. Issa says:

    Nice work Sophie you could improve by putting subordinate clause

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