devan and daniel the battle of britain

2 Responses to devan and daniel the battle of britain

1. majcs says:

   July 2, 2018 at 1:49 pm

   Make sure that your sentences make sense.
   Check if you have capital letters.
   Why did you add colours to your work
2. jayna says:

   July 2, 2018 at 2:01 pm

   I like it because it has lots of colours
   the third parapharph is too short

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