EMILY AND RUBEN

Posted on July 2, 2018 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to EMILY AND RUBEN

  1. majcs says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:51 pm

    Why did you add those pictures?
    Why did you add colours to your work?
    Check if you added correct speech

  2. nesue says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:57 pm

    I like the way that you put a picture with couler
    why did you work about tanks
    you can inprove by writing a bit more work

  3. Devan Jaynair says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:57 pm

    I LIKED THAT YOU USED COLOURS.WHY did you write coming back under a picture?Can you use more description.

  4. silll says:
    July 2, 2018 at 2:04 pm

    I like you righting keep on going

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