Great work! I liek how you added adjectives.They really helped me imagen the setting. Why have you used brackets for ‘a mad scientist’ instead of a subordinate claus? You should describe the scientist more.
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Great work! I liek how you added adjectives.They really helped me imagen the setting. Why have you used brackets for ‘a mad scientist’ instead of a subordinate claus? You should describe the scientist more.