frankestien

2 Responses to frankestien

1. oliwier says:

   November 21, 2016 at 2:13 pm

   I like the way how you you described the graveyard and the house .
   Why have you described the spiders like that?
   Try writing a little bit more next time ?
2. Hishanth says:

   November 21, 2016 at 2:20 pm

   I love the similies you have added.Why have you made the story petrifying?Don’t type in to much adjectives.

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