Sathuya My Reflection of Year Four

6 Responses to Sathuya My Reflection of Year Four

1. Layla Cousins says:

   July 12, 2018 at 10:41 am

   I liked how you did loads of description
   Next time you should add exclamation and question marks
2. Daniel Hunter says:

   July 12, 2018 at 10:48 am

   hi can you put more detail in you write
3. Qasim Elmi says:

   July 12, 2018 at 10:49 am

   you should improve on adding a comma
4. Daniel Hunter says:

   July 12, 2018 at 10:54 am

   can put more datal in your work
5. Devan Jaynair says:

   July 12, 2018 at 10:55 am

   BRILLIANT WORK.next time more work
6. Sathuya Rajaseelan says:

   July 12, 2018 at 11:03 am

   thanks

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