I really like your imagination and your adjectives in your story.I’m really looking forwards to the next part ! Next time use a question to improve your work.
You used good adjectives and punctuation.ALso you used good similes.
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I really like your imagination and your adjectives in your story.I’m really looking forwards to the next part !
Next time use a question to improve your work.
You used good adjectives and punctuation.ALso you used good similes.