The performance worked well as the lines were told with the correct emphasis. This made the poem seem real and makes it intriguing for the listener/watcher. The poem consists of personification like’ Forest can keep secrets’. The different sections
of the poem are laid out in two lines and frequently more.
The thing that worked well was that we all together and done it in one day.
It uses personification and similes because it say,’And darkness raps her like a gown.’
And we must keep forest,
Forest is what we keep.
Forest is where we keep secrets,
Secrets are kept in Forest,
Away from fast-eye sun.
By Emilia.
We could evaluate this poem by explaining more about the mysterious El Dorado and why Forest dreams of touching gold. What worked well is that it explains that we should stop deforestation. The structure is that each section is split into 2 lines and it uses personification for Forest as she makes the forest sound like a woman.
Q1 I like the way the author uses “but coming back to secrets”because it leds me to this deep thought .This tells me that the author is making an amispher .Q2 What worked well for me was when we did our art and my favourite part was when we had to read the line (of the poem) and we had to imagine what does it mean.Q4 Yes it does use a personification because when it says forest could keep secrets forest can’t keep secrets because they don’t have mouths.
When it say forest can keep secrets that is personification and forest letting her hair down,forest cover her business,darkness wrap her like a gown forest is a bad dream,forest dreaming,forest dreaming of cascara gold,forest stretch and stir to a new day of sound.
The thing that I enjoyed the most,was the mystery lines from the poem.We had to creat a drawing based on what we think the line means.In my opinion ,the art work and word put together in a short video was an amazing idea .
The structure is mystery/drama . I think how we all managed to agree on parts and done the work in one day is what worked well. Forest tune in everyday, to watersound and birdsound. Forest tune in everyday, to listen to singing birds and waterfalls. The poem uses personification when it says ‘Forest could keep secrets, forest could keep secrets.’
I think that the poem could have more lines because then we can have more to read about, and learn more about poems and her thoughts.
It uses personifacation because when it says forest could keep secrets forest could keep secrets is personification.
The performance worked well as the lines were told with the correct emphasis. This made the poem seem real and makes it intriguing for the listener/watcher. The poem consists of personification like’ Forest can keep secrets’. The different sections
of the poem are laid out in two lines and frequently more.
The thing that worked well was that we all together and done it in one day.
It uses personification and similes because it say,’And darkness raps her like a gown.’
And we must keep forest,
Forest is what we keep.
Forest is where we keep secrets,
Secrets are kept in Forest,
Away from fast-eye sun.
By Emilia.
We could evaluate this poem by explaining more about the mysterious El Dorado and why Forest dreams of touching gold. What worked well is that it explains that we should stop deforestation. The structure is that each section is split into 2 lines and it uses personification for Forest as she makes the forest sound like a woman.
Q1 I like the way the author uses “but coming back to secrets”because it leds me to this deep thought .This tells me that the author is making an amispher .Q2 What worked well for me was when we did our art and my favourite part was when we had to read the line (of the poem) and we had to imagine what does it mean.Q4 Yes it does use a personification because when it says forest could keep secrets forest can’t keep secrets because they don’t have mouths.
In between each part of the poem there is a small gap so next time there couldn’t be.
The thing I really like is when your say your part your picture shows up.
When it say forest can keep secrets that is personification and forest letting her hair down,forest cover her business,darkness wrap her like a gown forest is a bad dream,forest dreaming,forest dreaming of cascara gold,forest stretch and stir to a new day of sound.
The thing that I enjoyed the most,was the mystery lines from the poem.We had to creat a drawing based on what we think the line means.In my opinion ,the art work and word put together in a short video was an amazing idea .
The structure is mystery/drama . I think how we all managed to agree on parts and done the work in one day is what worked well. Forest tune in everyday, to watersound and birdsound. Forest tune in everyday, to listen to singing birds and waterfalls. The poem uses personification when it says ‘Forest could keep secrets, forest could keep secrets.’