Well done Rhys, you have used some lovey descriptive language. Can I suggest that you re read you work, to make sure that it makes sense. How can you improve on what you have already done? I look forward to reading this again after you have looked at it again.
Good but still go back over your punctuation and upper case and lower case letters, I’m
not telling you where they are,but look over it
Well done Rhys, you have used some lovey descriptive language. Can I suggest that you re read you work, to make sure that it makes sense. How can you improve on what you have already done? I look forward to reading this again after you have looked at it again.
Well done and I like the descrption of the Narcissus.Why did you magpie names from myths? Next time type faster.
Fantastic puncation Rhys , and you have amazing descriptive language.
Why did you pick Narcissus and Echo?
Check your spelling Rhys.
It is amazing Rhys you have done good punctuation!!!
GREAT START, WHAT AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!