my friendly dragon

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5 Responses to my friendly dragon

  1. lsimpson says:

    Well done! Great use of expanded noun phrases and adverbs. Just make sure you put your next sentence after the comma on a new line so it has the same structure as a poem.

  2. lisa says:

    I like your inmagination. I can see a picture of the dragon in my head.

  3. Zzschr says:

    Its good.

    I like what you have done.

    Do a little more.

  4. RaniaM says:

    I can imagine it Well done

  5. Layla says:

    Hey who is you name I dont no whos this reply is

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