Adams story

Posted on November 21, 2016 by Deleted User
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  1. huanj says:
    November 21, 2016 at 3:30 pm

    Positive: You used good adjective also you used good opening connective.
    Question:Why did you start a sentence with ‘because.’
    Suggestion:You could add more connective

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