You have used a good operner at the begining of the story.I like this because you have used capital letters in the begining of a sentence.Why did you use” worried and nervous” in the sentence ?Next time make sure when you write speech in the other line.
The first sentence does not make sense’King Aegeus,who was a prince.’
I like it when your speech correctly.
Make sure your sentences make sense ‘As King Minos had requested “Father why do we send the children to Crete and don’t come back?”asked Theseus curiously.
You have used a good operner at the begining of the story.I like this because you have used capital letters in the begining of a sentence.Why did you use” worried and nervous” in the sentence ?Next time make sure when you write speech in the other line.
The first sentence does not make sense’King Aegeus,who was a prince.’
I like it when your speech correctly.
Make sure your sentences make sense ‘As King Minos had requested “Father why do we send the children to Crete and don’t come back?”asked Theseus curiously.