Well done Aaliyah!! Great use of similes, adverbs and adjectives in your poem. Where did you get the idea for spiky as a porcupine? Can you just check that you have put each sentence on a new line, so it looks like the structure of a poem.
Very good work Aaliyah I like your imagination.
If his dragon was real what would his name be?
Next time maybe check your work because you missed a capital after a full stop.
Aaliyah well done I like your poem and the bit were it said it keeps me happy when I’m sick.Can you add punctuation?
Can you look at your spelling mistakes?
Well done Aaliyah!! Great use of similes, adverbs and adjectives in your poem. Where did you get the idea for spiky as a porcupine? Can you just check that you have put each sentence on a new line, so it looks like the structure of a poem.
Very good work Aaliyah I like your imagination.
If his dragon was real what would his name be?
Next time maybe check your work because you missed a capital after a full stop.
Aaliyah well done I like your poem and the bit were it said it keeps me happy when I’m sick.Can you add punctuation?
Can you look at your spelling mistakes?
Great Work Aaliyah what you’re dragon’s name?
Aaliyah I love The way you added in discripsion well done I love it I might cry by that
Well done Aaliyah great poem