Amazing diary entry! Why did you put “Will I see my family again” in capitals and why didn’t you put a question mark at the end of it. Next time remember to put your “I” in capitals.
Amazing diary entry! Why did you put “Will I see my family again” in capitals and why didn’t you put a question mark at the end of it? Next time remember to put your “I” in capitals.
Amazing diary entry! Why did you put “Will I see my family again” in capitals and why didn’t you put a question mark at the end of it. Next time remember to put your “I” in capitals.
Amazing diary entry! Why did you put “Will I see my family again” in capitals and why didn’t you put a question mark at the end of it? Next time remember to put your “I” in capitals.
Why did you use ‘it was the craziest day of my life’? Remember not to use so many capital letters. I like That you used first person for you diary.
I like the lovely description of your life as a Viking.Can you add capital letters.Next time don’t do capital letter for the whole sentence.
I loved when you used great punctuation maybe you should make you’re paragraphs bigger.Also why did you use that punctuation.