you used a very good conjunction and similys.You could add a metephor.
I LOVE IT
I love how you have described trees you have really used your imagination I love it .But why did you describe the trees like that? Next time you should write a little more because it is very interesting.
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you used a very good conjunction and similys.You could add a metephor.
I LOVE IT
I love how you have described trees you have really used your imagination I love it .But why did you describe the trees like that? Next time you should write a little more because it is very interesting.