well done chris.
star:Good ryming
Suggestion:Put Capital Letters in the new lines
Robis next time try add some more like why did you like it show a example also use this you say a suggestion a question and something positive.
Good punctuation Chris
Do more Chris!
Chris well done for using personification . Why did you use so many adjectives?.I suggest you use more punctuation.
I like what you did but why did you choose this? to improve pleas make your typing bigger.
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well done chris.
star:Good ryming
Suggestion:Put Capital Letters in the new lines
Robis next time try add some more like why did you like it show a example also use this you say a suggestion a question and something positive.
Good punctuation Chris
Do more Chris!
Chris well done for using personification . Why did you use so many adjectives?.I suggest you use more punctuation.
I like what you did but why did you choose this? to improve pleas make your typing bigger.