I like the description full of vocabulary like ‘it looks like a rainbow in the countryside’.
Can you add a little a bit of more description?Next time don’t do to many similies.
That’s a great comment, Hishanth.
Tiago, this is a really strong piece of writing. I love your adjectives such as calmly. Could you read through your last paragraph? ‘The strongest to hang on’ doesn’t make sense.
I like the description full of vocabulary like ‘it looks like a rainbow in the countryside’.
Can you add a little a bit of more description?Next time don’t do to many similies.
That’s a great comment, Hishanth.
Tiago, this is a really strong piece of writing. I love your adjectives such as calmly. Could you read through your last paragraph? ‘The strongest to hang on’ doesn’t make sense.