The snow setting

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2 Responses to The snow setting

  1. sdavis says:

    I love your personification, ‘ dancing in the wind’. Remember though, you don’t need to say ‘like a human’. The verb is enough for us to recognise that. Why is shimmered a good descriptive word for icicles?

    • caseyr says:

      “Thank you and I will remember next time”.
      “The resen why I used it is because it goes great and icicle look like it”.

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