I really loved the similes my favourite one was that were as long as the royal table,shinning like diamonds in the moon light.its lovely but I think you should add some more punctuation but over than that I really liked it .
why did you use loads of similes
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I really loved the similes my favourite one was that were as long as the royal table,shinning like diamonds in the moon light.its lovely but I think you should add some more punctuation but over than that I really liked it .
why did you use loads of similes