Adams Diary

5 Responses to Adams Diary

1. Rhys says:

   January 26, 2017 at 11:26 am

   I like How you Described The Character as A Terrifying Metal Beast, How was is the Most Terrifying Day of your life? explain more
2. RONNIE-Jay says:

   January 26, 2017 at 11:32 am

   I like the way you deskriv the IRON man.

   cepup the good wark.

   you ceped saying ran
3. sdavis says:

   January 26, 2017 at 11:34 am

   Full stops and punctuation….fix it and I’ll comment on your lovely words.
4. oliwier says:

   January 26, 2017 at 11:42 am

   adam I like the way that you said it was the most terrifing day of my life.
   You must us punctution adam ok.
5. Hishanth 11 says:

   February 8, 2017 at 11:21 am

   I like the descriptive words like terrifying metal beast.Next time use punctuation and correct your spellings.

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