There is some fantastic vocabulary in here as well as showing emotion instead of saying it. There are a few spelling errors in the second paragraph so could you check that?
Kelesy i love your work.You should check your spellings!Why did you write ion man instead if iron man???!!!
Wow Kelsey that diary entry. Maybe you should use more paragraphs?
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There is some fantastic vocabulary in here as well as showing emotion instead of saying it.
There are a few spelling errors in the second paragraph so could you check that?
Kelesy i love your work.You should check your spellings!Why did you write ion man instead if iron man???!!!
Wow Kelsey that diary entry.
Maybe you should use more paragraphs?