Hi Lilly its me Chanel from yew class I like how u added more details to your story. But could u add more about what happened in the story but well done your story is rally good but add more about what happened in the story and its really interesting
Well done Lilly. You have recalled some details about the story.
Could you add some more detail about what happened in the story?
Hi Lilly its me Chanel from yew class I like how u added more details to your story. But could u add more about what happened in the story but well done your story is rally good but add more about what happened in the story and its really interesting