Well done Sara, I love how you have organised your review in clear paragraphs. Can you check to make sure that all of your paragraphs make sense?
Love it Sara.Can you try to make your paragraphs make sence? I like the way you have layed your work out!
Sara I love the story you wrote down I really like the adjectives you did like small and best. How does Tashi feel after the overseer said that? Maybe do more paragraphs.
Sara I love your work but make sure your sentences make sense
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Well done Sara, I love how you have organised your review in clear paragraphs. Can you check to make sure that all of your paragraphs make sense?
Love it Sara.Can you try to make your paragraphs make sence? I like the way you have layed your work out!
Sara I love the story you wrote down I really like the adjectives you did like small and best.
How does Tashi feel after the overseer said that?
Maybe do more paragraphs.
Sara I love your work but make sure your sentences make sense