I like the part when Hectezeus was going to the boat and you done like rhyme.
You have loads of adjectives. Can you add in adverbs? Use the right describing words.
Nice wow words like luckily and splashy .
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I like the part when Hectezeus was going to the boat and you done like rhyme.
You have loads of adjectives.
Can you add in adverbs?
Use the right describing words.
Nice wow words like luckily and splashy .