I like the part about his horns as sharp as swords.Can you add more detail to the sentence?
I consider you just focus on one thing than just one sentence to describe it
Oliwier, I like the way you described your minotaur!
Why did you choose these adjectives?
Next time use the right adjectives; bony, black mud doesn’t make sense. Try gooey, black mud instead.
I like your first sentence because it had lots of detail,and the sentence about the monsters rotten breath.
Where did you get all this detail?
I got this detail from my head
I like the part about his horns as sharp as swords.Can you add more detail to the sentence?
I consider you just focus on one thing than just one sentence to describe it
I like the description of the Minotaur.Can you write a little bit more?Next time a adverbs.
Oops sorry made a spelling the a in the third sentence should be add.
Oliwier, I like the way you described your minotaur!
Why did you choose these adjectives?
Next time use the right adjectives; bony, black mud doesn’t make sense. Try gooey, black mud instead.