Your punctuation,paraghraph is good And your story is very very fantastic you dont have adjetives
I like the good adjectives you used.Why did you didn’t you start the hero’s name with the beginning of yours.Next time check your punctuation.
So people knew who he was at the beginning.
Great Story and Punctuation. Where did you get the idea from?. Improve your spelling.
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Your punctuation,paraghraph is good And your story is very very fantastic
you dont have adjetives
I like the good adjectives you used.Why did you didn’t you start the hero’s name with the beginning of yours.Next time check your punctuation.
So people knew who he was at the beginning.
Great Story and Punctuation. Where did you get the idea from?. Improve your spelling.