Niomy and the slayer

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5 Responses to Niomy and the slayer

  1. ruwaida is a animater says:

    Sherry that is a good story.
    Why didn’t you finish the story?
    Try and use surbordinate clause.

  2. ryans says:

    very good but add some colons

  3. joe says:

    Nice description for the main person.

  4. joe says:

    Why did you add this story and did not write another one.

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