Its a fantastic story because you used your imagination.Why didn’t you use a different character? If you want,you could change Ariadne into a different character!
Well done Casey, you have used some lovely descriptions in your writing, maybe you could think about using some time connectives to make your writing flow more. Read through you work to check your spellings.
Will there be any adventures on the sea?
its a fantastic story.why didn’t you use a different charecter? If you want,you could change Ariadne into a different charecter.
Its a fantastic story because you used your imagination.Why didn’t you use a different character? If you want,you could change Ariadne into a different character!
Well done Casey, you have used some lovely descriptions in your writing, maybe you could think about using some time connectives to make your writing flow more. Read through you work to check your spellings.
Will there be any adventures on the sea?