Great story Stefania! I love how you describe the monster using an expanded noun phrase and have used a hyphen to help you with this! Don’t forget your commas after subordinate clauses and fronted adverbials.
Well done Stefania and I like the way you describe your monster.Why did the story have 14 children instead of 7?
I suggest you use more surbordinate clauses please.
Wow great work Stefania, you have some fantastic language in your story. Great description well done.
What is Gorgiderous going to do about what is happening to the children? Will there be any adventures? I look forward to reading more of this story, I hope you keep the great descriptive language throughout your writing.
loving it because loads of lovely things to show
i like your work
i love you work stefania because there is loads of presentation in your work
thank but your one is better
thanks but yours is more better then mine
not true
stefania i like your story soooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ruwaida you are exaggerating to much.
Can you explain the problem with exaggerating too much?
I ment she used to many o in the word so.
Amazing Stefania.
Thank you Adam
Great story Stefania! I love how you describe the monster using an expanded noun phrase and have used a hyphen to help you with this! Don’t forget your commas after subordinate clauses and fronted adverbials.
Thank you for the suggestion Mrs Harris and I will try to add some when I have time.
Well done Stefania and I like the way you describe your monster.Why did the story have 14 children instead of 7?
I suggest you use more surbordinate clauses please.
Wow great work Stefania, you have some fantastic language in your story. Great description well done.
What is Gorgiderous going to do about what is happening to the children? Will there be any adventures? I look forward to reading more of this story, I hope you keep the great descriptive language throughout your writing.
Thank you Mrs Naylor for the compliments.
Great work Stefania
Thank you Alane.