theseus and the minatuar

Posted on November 10, 2016 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to theseus and the minatuar

  1. dazi -gade says:
    November 11, 2016 at 10:25 am

    loving your story from dazi

  2. Louise Naylor says:
    November 21, 2016 at 5:43 pm

    Well done, this story has got potential as you have some lovely wow words. Read through your work and think about what connectives you could use. How can you improve on your story to make it even better?

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