williams amazing story

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12 Responses to williams amazing story

  1. aA says:

    great discrabing willam.

  2. aA says:

    Why did you pick a tiger for a villan.

  3. aA says:

    Great discrabing willam.

    why did you choose a tiger for a villan?

    It is good but you must type faster

  4. Hishanth says:

    I liked the description of the girl. Why did you choose a girl as your heroine?

  5. Fatima Ahmad says:

    wow william i really like your story!

  6. santt says:

    william your work is terrific.

  7. santt says:

    your terrific work be like this fantastic

  8. Louise Naylor says:

    Well done William, you have used some really good descriptive language. I would like to see some nice connectives in your writing. What is the princess going to do about helping the children? I look forward to reading the rest of this story.

  9. Elaine Winter says:

    Great Work William

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