Wow, what a lovely descriptive piece of writing Casey! Is there anything you could change or do differently to make it even better, maybe some dialogue between the characters? I look forward to reading the rest of your story, well done.
I love how you used so much descriptive adjectives to describe the brothers!
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Wow, what a lovely descriptive piece of writing Casey! Is there anything you could change or do differently to make it even better, maybe some dialogue between the characters? I look forward to reading the rest of your story, well done.
I love how you used so much descriptive adjectives to describe the brothers!