Good job Kelsey, this has potential to become a really interesting story, some lovely language being used. Maybe you could give more character to the individual brothers. How do you think you could do that? I look forward to reading the rest of your story.
Good job Kelsey, this has potential to become a really interesting story, some lovely language being used. Maybe you could give more character to the individual brothers. How do you think you could do that? I look forward to reading the rest of your story.