Good job Rhys, you have used some really lovey language and descriptive writing. Try reading back through your work to make sure it all makes sense. How could you rework it to make it even better? I look forward to reading it again.
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Good job Rhys, you have used some really lovey language and descriptive writing. Try reading back through your work to make sure it all makes sense. How could you rework it to make it even better? I look forward to reading it again.