I LOVE YOUR STORY
I like the way you started your story. Maybe you can use subordinating clause in your writing.
Abdi I like the way you said one winy night .Why did you not put a capital letter on o. I suggest you check for your punuation mistake.
I like how you begin your story maybe next time use one cold icy day in a land called Ancient Greece lived a god called Zeus. Have you checked your first sentence?
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I LOVE YOUR STORY
I like the way you started your story. Maybe you can use subordinating clause in your writing.
Abdi I like the way you said one winy night .Why did you not put a capital letter on o. I suggest you check for your punuation mistake.
I like how you begin your story maybe next time use one cold icy day in a land called Ancient Greece lived a god called Zeus. Have you checked your first sentence?