The cat was sleeping quietly,while everybody was asleep.
Well done Rania, you have improved my sentence. What did you do to improve it? Could you include an expanded noun phrase next time?
while everybody was asleep,the cat was secretly went down stairs to eat his fish.
Super sentence Rania! What correction do you need to make to the start of your sentence?
the little boy was wearing his big cumfy coat
Lovely adjectives Sophie. What punctuation do you need to include in your list of adjectives? Could you add in an expanded noun phrase?
His face was so just a weird thing he was going through a long way and then I was telling them that he had
Which sentence were you improving Lilly?
The Grey Cat With Blue Eyes Was Fighting A Dog Called Ace Like A Lion After It Was Sleeping Quiet Like a Mouse
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The cat was sleeping quietly,while everybody was asleep.
Well done Rania, you have improved my sentence. What did you do to improve it? Could you include an expanded noun phrase next time?
while everybody was asleep,the cat was secretly went down stairs to eat his fish.
Super sentence Rania! What correction do you need to make to the start of your sentence?
the little boy was wearing his big cumfy coat
Lovely adjectives Sophie. What punctuation do you need to include in your list of adjectives?
Could you add in an expanded noun phrase?
His face was so just a weird thing he was going through a long way and then I was telling them that he had
Which sentence were you improving Lilly?
The Grey Cat With Blue Eyes Was Fighting A Dog Called Ace Like A Lion After It Was Sleeping Quiet Like a Mouse