Wow Fatima that I love that snowy description Like bright.
Why did you like what you made?
Why did you put in snowy photos?
I suggest you put in more paragraphs
But it was Amazing.
Well done for using an adverb like outside to open your sentences. Why have you written only short sentences? Could you have used conjunctions to write complex sentences?
Good description of the snowy setting i can make a picture in my mind. For the snow you could say the snow always fly’s up in the bright blue sky.
Wow Fatima that I love that snowy description Like bright.
Why did you like what you made?
Why did you put in snowy photos?
I suggest you put in more paragraphs
But it was Amazing.
fatima i love your snow.y descrip.t.io..n.
from wasma
Well done for using an adverb like outside to open your sentences. Why have you written only short sentences? Could you have used conjunctions to write complex sentences?
Thank you! I wrote short sentences because i could’nt think!!!!Yes